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Posted: 04-25-2005 11:36 PM

Tiffany: for any and all who've been afraid to tell a friend how much they really love them... what do you think?

A Question of Love

If I tell you how I feel
will you turn away from me?
Cast aside all that we've had
because of something that just can't be?
If I bare my soul to you,
lay out my heart for you to see,
will you stomp it into the dust?
Will you make that same heart bleed?
And if I tell you my love is locked away
and only you possess the key,
will you let my broken heart rust?
Or will you set my feelings free?
Will you help our love to grow
from seed, to sapling, to sturdy tree?
Will you join your life to mine
and look upon that life with glee?
Yet still I just can't take the risk
of saying to you those sweet words, three.
I'm scared to change what we already have
because forever is an eternity.

Posted: 05-01-2005 12:37 AM

Aisha: thats really nice

Posted: 05-02-2005 03:00 AM

Tiffany: aw thx hun

Posted: 05-30-2005 03:43 PM

Zechariah: nice i really liked the ending

Posted: 04-07-2006 03:11 PM

Conrad: What a nice poem....It really carries a lot across the boundary lol...everyone can relate to this poem. Luv it!!!!

Posted: 04-07-2006 03:12 PM

Conrad: can I borro that poem for myself?

Posted: 03-23-2008 04:47 PM

Marlon: I really like these lines
dats one hell of a question - da answer should be well thought out when ready to answer - great job

...And if I tell you my love is locked away
and only you possess the key,
will you let my broken heart rust?
Or will you set my feelings free?
Will you help our love to grow
from seed, to sapling, to sturdy tree?...


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